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Theatre

Child,  
The stars of the heavens are not
so very far away.
For when you sleep
they creep, nearer, nearer,
but for a glimpse
Of you and I.

Ever-bright and all knowing,
Yet still these immortals illuminate
Curiously.

Why, sister, why?

I will tell you a secret, dear child,
The great secret of the stars-
They burn, they break and
Burst forth
with life,
Everlasting. What are we, child,
But blades of grass, swayed and
Surprised by every breath of wind?
Until one day
We stand no more.

Higher lights laugh down at us
Way up in the sky,
But none can resist a second look,
A closer look, child,
At crawling, craving hearts,
Such as ours.
©2006-2009 ~curlyisafreak
:iconcurlyisafreak:

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This is all a little bit platonic, but nevermind.

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:iconsharem:
I think that this is rather nice. It's one way of explaining the stars...^__^

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:iconnotofadminium:
Wow. @_@ Very, very nice. I should've read this at night, it'd be even better that way. Really though, this poem sucessfully made me feel both at awe and surprisingly small. I clap for it. *Claps*
Unfortunately, I don't know too much about poetry, so I can't critique very well. By what I can tell though, it's pretty good as it is.
:iconcurlyisafreak:
:D
Dont worry, i dont much about poetry either.

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I'll make it to the moon if I have to crawl
:iconinfiniteone:
It sounds like an encouraging teacher or family member ^^ Nice..

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May we meet again in Paradise.
:iconcurlyisafreak:
Thanks, but, seriously, there's no such thing:
"...an encouraging teacher"

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I'll make it to the moon if I have to crawl
:iconnirelleth:
Very beautiful, ah very nice idea and I also like alot the way you expressed it...
Why, sister, why? this kinda seperates the poems into to part, what works really well!

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.:.:.:. Do I fall or do I fly?.:.:.
:iconnirelleth:
Very beautiful, ah very nice idea and I also like alot the way you expressed it...
Why, sister, why? this kinda seperates the poems into to part, what works really well!

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.:.:.:. Do I fall or do I fly?.:.:.
:iconcurlyisafreak:
Thanks muchly!!!!!

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I'll make it to the moon if I have to crawl
:iconnyctophiliac:
I really do like this. It sounds like speech - which is where I always fall short of the mark, thus I commend you doubly for carrying it off so well - and still flows so elegantly. And, of course, the concept is absolutely beautiful :)

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